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On a Class Reunion Cocktail Napkin (Lunes)

by Lacy D Phillips

I am a stiff drink

in your hand,

cold and comforting.

I’ve no aftertaste

when drank straight,

only consequence.

Intoxicating

tequila

singeing your windpipe.

I have disappeared,

melted ice

diluting liquor.

I’m now a song

in your head

ever repeating.

I’m not forgotten

easily

like names of classmates.

05/29/2004

Author's Note: WINNNER June 2004 Spyder's Empire Workshop!!! Series of six lunes written for the criteria as follows: "Write a set of 6 Lunes to form one poem. Start the poem with an original metaphor for yourself. Use at least 2 concrete images in the piece."

Posted on 05/29/2004
Copyright © 2024 Lacy D Phillips

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/04/04 at 11:48 PM

you're poetry is amazing, succint and inviting, a tale well told powerful conclusion

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