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by JD Clay

 

 

I may not be the man of your dreams but I had you in mine last night.

 

 

 

 

01/11/2004

Author's Note: No need to wrack your brain, jadi does not consider this poetry and all comments go unsolicited.

Posted on 05/27/2004
Copyright © 2024 JD Clay

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 05/27/04 at 03:38 AM

Oh yeah... now this one would get me! Maybe one day someone will tell me that.

Posted by Cathlyn Cartier on 05/27/04 at 03:38 AM

Gosh, did that sound desperate for affection?

Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/27/04 at 05:17 AM

psttt...how successful is this pick-up line? I surely would smile!

Posted by Rula Shin on 05/27/04 at 12:56 PM

Hahahaha ;-)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/28/04 at 01:14 PM

*soft smile* Well put JD. Perhaps the start of something special?!

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/28/04 at 01:29 PM

heehee hahahahaha... this is priceless... *grin*

Posted by Max Bouillet on 05/28/04 at 03:28 PM

Great snipet that is sure to become a popular pick up line. :)

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/29/04 at 11:31 AM

Not poetry but always incomparably JD!

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 06/01/04 at 12:33 AM

wonderful..

Posted by Amy Niggel on 09/17/04 at 04:57 PM

Heh sounds like the best pick up line ever written ;) I love this!

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