Discoverer of.... (acrostic) by Anne EngelenUnwrought soul
Noteworthy part of me, like
Kindling wood
Nucleus of my being
Outriding various storms in the
Watches of the night
Nomad in no-manÂ’s land
Tempest-tossed, yet
Endlessly exploring, only to
Reverberate new
Revelations
I, now surrender
To your yearning
Omnipresent in me
Ready for this journey where
You and I both shall be ONE 05/26/2004 Posted on 05/26/2004 Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen
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Posted by Maureen Glaude on 05/26/04 at 04:49 PM this acrostic kept me in suspense and hanging on to the last line. Very compelling. Sounds like a positive move. |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 05/26/04 at 06:48 PM The journey to find oneself is a difficult undertaking at best. This is beautifully written and truly insightful. Great read. |
Posted by David R Spellman on 05/26/04 at 09:46 PM Excellent Anne! |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/26/04 at 10:22 PM anne, this poem is particularly special to me, as my husband and i are celebrating our wedding anniversary today, and we are looking forward to a new, beautiful future... this is brilliant and beautiful... oh, i needed to read this poem today... blessings to you! |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/27/04 at 06:11 AM Very well done Annie...Charlie |
Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 05/27/04 at 06:12 AM Unusual skill and so much soul! Beautiful, Anne. |
Posted by Charles J Hannan on 05/27/04 at 09:43 AM Wow...this, Anne, could easily be one of your best..a wonderfully written poem indeed!..MUAHS!! |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/27/04 at 04:07 PM 'Unwrought soul....Nomad in no-man’s land.....Endlessly exploring, only to
Reverberate new
Revelations..'and finally', I, now surrender
To your yearning
Omnipresent in me
Ready for this journey where
You and I both shall be ONE'. Yes, one with your essence. One within as well without. Beautiful.
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Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/27/04 at 04:36 PM Has a worthy spiritual almost religious tone to it Anne. Nice work! |
Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 05/28/04 at 02:23 PM Lovely, perfect, sublime, revealing, open, honest..shall I go on.... Priceless. |
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