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Discoverer of.... (acrostic)

by Anne Engelen

Unwrought soul

Noteworthy part of me, like

Kindling wood

Nucleus of my being

Outriding various storms in the

Watches of the night

Nomad in no-manÂ’s land

 

Tempest-tossed, yet

Endlessly exploring, only to

Reverberate new

Revelations

I, now surrender

To your yearning

Omnipresent in me

Ready for this journey where

You and I both shall be   ONE

05/26/2004

Posted on 05/26/2004
Copyright © 2024 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 05/26/04 at 04:49 PM

this acrostic kept me in suspense and hanging on to the last line. Very compelling. Sounds like a positive move.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 05/26/04 at 06:48 PM

The journey to find oneself is a difficult undertaking at best. This is beautifully written and truly insightful. Great read.

Posted by David R Spellman on 05/26/04 at 09:46 PM

Excellent Anne!

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/26/04 at 10:22 PM

anne, this poem is particularly special to me, as my husband and i are celebrating our wedding anniversary today, and we are looking forward to a new, beautiful future... this is brilliant and beautiful... oh, i needed to read this poem today... blessings to you!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/27/04 at 06:11 AM

Very well done Annie...Charlie

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 05/27/04 at 06:12 AM

Unusual skill and so much soul! Beautiful, Anne.

Posted by Charles J Hannan on 05/27/04 at 09:43 AM

Wow...this, Anne, could easily be one of your best..a wonderfully written poem indeed!..MUAHS!!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/27/04 at 04:07 PM

'Unwrought soul....Nomad in no-man’s land.....Endlessly exploring, only to Reverberate new Revelations..'and finally', I, now surrender To your yearning Omnipresent in me Ready for this journey where You and I both shall be ONE'. Yes, one with your essence. One within as well without. Beautiful.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/27/04 at 04:36 PM

Has a worthy spiritual almost religious tone to it Anne. Nice work!

Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 05/28/04 at 02:23 PM

Lovely, perfect, sublime, revealing, open, honest..shall I go on.... Priceless.

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