Wether Or Not...
by J. P. Davies
We gave you our votes to come in
first impressions are where you begin
an unwritten pact
to comment with tact
you've started a game you can't win.
Posted on 05/24/2004
Copyright © 2020 J. P. Davies
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/25/04 at 02:12 AM|
Really like the biting edge of this one, its determination to win. Survival of the fittest even among Limming poemt.
|Posted by Max Bouillet on 05/25/04 at 04:24 PM|
Nice limmie. It's good to see these things done well. I can't seem to get the cadence down. Excellent read.