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Wether Or Not...

by J. P. Davies

We gave you our votes to come in
first impressions are where you begin
an unwritten pact
to comment with tact
you've started a game you can't win.

05/23/2004

Posted on 05/24/2004
Copyright © 2020 J. P. Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/25/04 at 02:12 AM

Really like the biting edge of this one, its determination to win. Survival of the fittest even among Limming poemt.

Posted by Max Bouillet on 05/25/04 at 04:24 PM

Nice limmie. It's good to see these things done well. I can't seem to get the cadence down. Excellent read.

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