| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/22/04 at 06:10 PM indeed, you can... and you have... blessings... |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 05/22/04 at 07:02 PM Your relationship with that quality is shown herer in it full fruitage. Once again, that first stanza...awsome...by nature you truly know how to make a first impression:o) |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/23/04 at 01:45 AM Gentleness sends that clarion call into the depths of consciousness, and latent pangs of silver, arc the cerebral to impart that age old challenge sans retort, who am I?
Me likes!
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Betania Tesch on 05/23/04 at 05:33 AM mmm this is nice. i can almost feel it. almost taste it. i love your poems. they make me feel so full. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/25/04 at 05:38 AM My cat in her room. ~(8^D)=C The sound of silver
brings forth many thoughts. Good poem Glenn |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 05/26/04 at 10:19 PM Glad to see that the hasp was loosened and that you heard that whisper and acted upon it so eloquently with this. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/27/04 at 02:35 AM It was a whisper from the Depths--
"What can you create?" In other words I AM when I AM. This PRESENCE alone can whisper its presence. Now the created will create the creator. This poem is the living example since it reflects the very PRESENCE of the creator of this piece so nicely created. haha
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