| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jason Wardell on 05/21/04 at 07:15 AM Welcome back? I know I've read this before. You may want to talk to the admin about this (if you lost your other password or something) as one person with two accounts is generally frowned upon. Just a heads-up. :) |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 05/21/04 at 05:40 PM Ah yes I remember this one from the apps and I too had to vote a YES! A wonderfully unique and creative piece indeed! I'm looking forward to more...welcome to Pathetic! |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/21/04 at 06:19 PM clever and fun. Welcome on board! |
| Posted by Allan Haslinds on 05/21/04 at 08:30 PM This has been one of my favorites. Oh, and I like the new name, though now I'm going to have to do all my commenting over again! |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 05/22/04 at 09:35 PM Hah, this is great.. welcome to Pathetic Amy :) |
| Posted by Christina Gleason on 05/23/04 at 04:23 AM welcome back. always a favorite : ) |
| Posted by Jolie Jordan on 05/24/04 at 04:44 AM welcome... back? this is still like, the coolest poem ever;) |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 06/21/04 at 01:11 PM I'm totally floored. Would you consider a counterpart sometime - like 'So I smiles a parenthesised smile and says to him...'?
Whatever - could not put this put-down down. |
| Posted by Betania Tesch on 06/27/04 at 07:28 AM Congrats on POTD. This is very very cute and charming. It deserves to be featured. |
| Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 06/27/04 at 03:48 PM Congrats and bundles of starfire for being POTD. This is a great piece of work. I adore it for it's sadly truthful portrayal of that phrase. Brilliant;) |
| Posted by Indigo Tempesta on 06/27/04 at 06:40 PM congratulations and i'm, like, totally floored by the precise wit(not to be trite, here). nice. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 06/27/04 at 10:11 PM I hear Meatloaf's Paradise By The Dashboard Lights in the backgrond... this is just sooooo..... soooooooo.... funnyperfecttrue! Congrats on POTD, by the way! |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 08/20/04 at 07:10 PM this just freaking cracks me up. very, very nice. *claps softly* how have i never heard of you? |
| Posted by Stephanie Kent on 08/22/04 at 07:25 PM Very, very, clever. Kudos:) |
| Posted by Amanda L Marron on 09/19/04 at 12:16 AM i could swear this is what he does think to himself when he says that. great write. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 12/23/04 at 05:26 AM This is so true of so many men. Well, at least we women always think it is! =) Adding this to my favs. Perfect! |
| Posted by David Hill on 01/05/05 at 12:04 AM Clever structure and captures a great deal of truth (compromises and lies and delusions). |
| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 04/26/05 at 12:03 AM oh man, perfect punch in the face. this is really good. reallllly good. |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 04/27/05 at 12:36 AM Ha! I love this. |
| Posted by Jersey D Gibson on 11/04/05 at 10:15 AM I didn't ignore, and I loved this poem!
yer pal
Jersey |
| Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 01/03/06 at 05:33 AM This is a cynical gem, if such a thing exists. |
| Posted by Eli Skipp on 02/08/06 at 05:24 PM Hahaha! I love this so much. |
| Posted by Nicole Assenza on 05/19/06 at 02:15 AM This made me laugh. Very clever <3 |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/02/06 at 04:59 AM I am totally loving this!! I think that (screw that dumb b*sta*rd he is a total jerk) you will get over him, if you don't ignore the ins of parenthesis. LOL
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| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 01/23/08 at 02:56 PM This is so well done! So true on so many levels and altough it seems by the look of it to be simple...it is so deep. BRAVO!!! ~N |
| Posted by Richard Fish on 09/09/08 at 01:49 AM Painful to the heart, but a treat for the mind. |
| Posted by Melissa Panther on 09/26/08 at 02:04 AM Love your authentic expression here! |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/07/09 at 04:41 PM I often think that EVERYONE thinks in parenthesis- really good write that everyone can relate to |
| Posted by Allison Smith on 08/25/09 at 12:12 AM OUCH!! |
| Posted by V. Blake on 11/21/09 at 02:17 AM As though you need any more words of encouragement, this is amazing. In every way a poem can be amazing. Thank you. |
| Posted by Jolie Jordan on 11/13/10 at 12:37 PM Fuck, yet again. This is such a strong woman's poem, I keep coming back for more. |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 12/02/10 at 07:34 PM Ah, a glimpse into the female mine... |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 06/01/11 at 07:10 PM I've nothing to say that's not already been said...but wow, oh wow, oh wow! |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 12/01/11 at 01:05 PM I can't believe I never left a comment on this gem. Still a favorite! |
| Posted by Angie Jenkins on 04/29/13 at 11:13 PM This is so incredibly true!!!! Story of my life recently. Thank you for saying it out loud!! |
| Posted by Rob Littler on 03/13/16 at 11:36 PM ...at least the last line wasn't "do" and all that ignored unsaid intensity wasn't a lifetime of animosity - and I LOVED the whole thing, justsoyaknow! |
