Flutters by Maureen Glaudechickadees
splashing
in
the
patio
pond
whirring
wings
dry,
the
neighbours
cat
drawing
closer
05/12/2004
Author's Note: Word Sonnet
Posted on 05/12/2004 Copyright © 2025 Maureen Glaude
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/12/04 at 01:20 PM Knowing me I can't take sides here between the birds and the cat, except to say ditto on James' comment. Well done. |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/12/04 at 02:09 PM run chichkadees, run!!!... peaceful image, with a touch of stress at the ending... i like this different piece... i like it a lot :)... blessings... |
Posted by JD Clay on 05/17/04 at 12:26 AM Ahh, a battle of wits! One of natures challenges that makes for great poetry. Nice work, Mo!
Pe4ce... |
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