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Flutters

by Maureen Glaude

chickadees
splashing
in
the
patio
pond
whirring
wings
dry,
the
neighbourÂ’s
cat
drawing
closer

05/12/2004

Author's Note: Word Sonnet

Posted on 05/12/2004
Copyright © 2021 Maureen Glaude

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/12/04 at 01:20 PM

Knowing me I can't take sides here between the birds and the cat, except to say ditto on James' comment. Well done.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/12/04 at 02:09 PM

run chichkadees, run!!!... peaceful image, with a touch of stress at the ending... i like this different piece... i like it a lot :)... blessings...

Posted by JD Clay on 05/17/04 at 12:26 AM

Ahh, a battle of wits! One of natures challenges that makes for great poetry. Nice work, Mo! Pe4ce...

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