|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/09/04 at 06:38 PM|
ah, "root of first hope"... beautiful acrostic in tribute to your mommy... blessings...
|Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 05/09/04 at 06:56 PM|
Simply lovely - has your mother read it? She should.
|Posted by Paganini Jones on 05/09/04 at 08:27 PM|
:) Lovely indeed, though short and apparently simple.
(Is there an acrostic competition / challenge on here somewhere, or is it just that there are accrostics in the wind at the moment?)
|Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/09/04 at 08:49 PM|
What can I say, but what the others have said - I love it and its stark simplicity expresses it all. Excellent!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/10/04 at 08:12 PM|
JA VUL! Thanks for writing and sharing this Mo. Me thinks this could apply to the majority of mothers, including my own. Come to think of it, you fit nicely into this equation as well. Happy belated Mother's Day. :o)
|Posted by J. P. Davies on 05/10/04 at 09:04 PM|
Great Tribute...good word choice. :)
|Posted by Rula Shin on 05/11/04 at 06:15 PM|
"eternal inspiration root of first hope" - oh what a beautiful tribute to your mother!! Thanks for sharing :-)
|Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/12/04 at 02:34 PM|
yes, in nut shell. 'Heart of home.' The concept of a home without a mother, well, I can't imagine. Straight and to the point.