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Soul's Mate
by Cathlyn CartierLost in the moment
suspended in eternity...
Sweet oblivion engulfs the soul.
Entwined forms merged together,
Ying~Yang,
universes collide
creating this peaceful unity...
Souls mate. 05/05/2004 Posted on 05/05/2004
Copyright © 2024 Cathlyn Cartier
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 05/05/04 at 11:48 PM This is perfectly peaceful, as the soul should be with it's mate..nice job! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/06/04 at 01:44 AM Mixed philosphies here? I guess I think of a David and Jonothan friendship when I think of Soul's mate. Intriguing concept ying--yang as applied to soul's mate. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/07/04 at 06:26 PM I really like the idea/concept of souls mating. Nice buildup to it in your poem Cathlyn. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/07/04 at 07:18 PM Yes, in ONENESS. This is vibrating with beautiful energies. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/09/04 at 08:31 PM Unified presence, philosophy, and passion, makes for chemistry that's hard to beat. This is a succinct piece that strikes that chord.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 05/10/04 at 06:17 PM "Soul's mate...suspended in eternity...merged together" - how very beautiful this is. A true vision of LOVE. Simply wonderful :-) |
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