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water riot

by Glenn Currier

blue jay's shaky bath
her water riot wakes me
universe is change

05/02/2004

Posted on 05/03/2004
Copyright © 2026 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/03/04 at 04:04 AM

Good Haiku Glenn....Charlie

Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/03/04 at 05:11 AM

beautiful haiku !

Posted by JD Clay on 05/05/04 at 12:43 PM

Your mind expanding haiku breathes life into countless possibilities, it being spring and all. Every bird outside my house was awake and full of life last night along with the full moon. They drove me from my bed at 3:30am with their song, so I joined them and woke up the rest of the neighborhood, hehe! Change is good, eh! Pe4ce...

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/06/04 at 01:16 AM

the slightest shift, the smalles sneeze, changes the universe... you speak beautifully of it here... blessings...

Posted by Ashley Beaudoin on 05/06/04 at 05:57 PM

wonderful job!

Posted by Kate Demeree on 05/07/04 at 01:35 AM

I sat and smiled a bit reading this... and read it a few times just for the joy it holds. Great haiku!

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