| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/03/04 at 04:04 AM Good Haiku Glenn....Charlie |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/03/04 at 05:11 AM beautiful haiku ! |
| Posted by Betania Tesch on 05/04/04 at 02:44 AM mmm and yet so the same. we live in these cycles of wet and dry...to read this is to plung underwater and come up gasping for breath. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/05/04 at 12:43 PM Your mind expanding haiku breathes life into countless possibilities, it being spring and all. Every bird outside my house was awake and full of life last night along with the full moon. They drove me from my bed at 3:30am with their song, so I joined them and woke up the rest of the neighborhood, hehe! Change is good, eh!
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/06/04 at 01:16 AM the slightest shift, the smalles sneeze, changes the universe... you speak beautifully of it here... blessings... |
| Posted by Ashley Beaudoin on 05/06/04 at 05:57 PM wonderful job! |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 05/07/04 at 01:35 AM I sat and smiled a bit reading this... and read it a few times just for the joy it holds. Great haiku! |
