My PPS Comments Limerick by Maureen Glaudeso you're sure your poem'll be hottest pick
for POTD among these site peers, sharp and slick
when along comes a pair of eyes so astute
they wonÂ’t accept anything just too cute
and it's back to digging in your bag of tricks
then you give in and change what they donÂ’t like
when another cries out, you had it just right!
Go figure how to please them, one and all
while answering the museÂ’s pressing call
04/26/2004 Author's Note: but you've got to love them! Even your toughest commentors.
sometimes they're your best friends.
Just for fun, this limerick attempt
Posted on 04/27/2004 Copyright © 2024 Maureen Glaude
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/27/04 at 05:00 AM Oh I like this Mo! Well done :) |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/27/04 at 01:22 PM Yup. Gotta please yerself first, but don't totally dismiss the critics either. A well rounded reminder. |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/27/04 at 03:15 PM So, a conflict between 'muse’s pressing call' and 'change what they don’t like'. Its a balancing act resulting out of a two opposite reactions. A nice humorous attempt.
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