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The Perfect Girl
by Oliver DrewmanThere is a perfect girl
She sits beneath a tree
Reading a french novel
About love and poverty
There is a perfect girl
She smiles at my grin
Is often an enigma
To understand within
There is a perfect girl
She loves to dance with me
Around the shadows long
A better love decree
There is a perfect girl
For every perfect guy
Just as we imagine
While clouds are drifting by 04/21/2004 Author's Note: Precipitated by reading Ashley Drew. Check out her site
Posted on 04/22/2004
Copyright © 2024 Oliver Drewman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashley Beaudoin on 04/22/04 at 05:13 AM Awww...this is wonderful. I'm glad that my writing inspired you to write this, its beautiful. |
| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 04/01/08 at 05:35 PM This is fantastic! I like the rhythm and the feel of this... This made my day! Thanks! ~N |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/14/10 at 03:30 PM what a great poem to start the day off with! congrats on potd! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/15/10 at 02:30 AM Congrats on POTD! Almost a surreal feel to this as this simple romantic notion is usually not the norm these days. The rhyme is catchy, the sentiment from the eternal optimist, and that's OK by me. |
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