| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/20/04 at 01:43 AM Some days can be very black. Glad you are better.
Well written...Charlie |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/20/04 at 02:58 AM Kind of reminds me of the shadow people. Some malevolent, others benevolent. Fortunately, yours seem to have been the latter. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/20/04 at 11:59 AM You have vividly portrayed one of those moments of between waking and sleeping I think! Glad it was not disconcerting! |
| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 04/21/04 at 03:49 AM i like the repetativeness of this... and i like the whole idea. very well done:) |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 04/21/04 at 05:26 AM There's a sophisticated, yet primitive beat to this poem that I like very much. Wonderful experience. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 04/21/04 at 06:56 PM A well-captured scene, perhaps of shadow tricks in the night of a sleepy mind. Great to see this from you! |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/22/04 at 06:34 AM I liked the repetitive cadance to the poem as well...it was dreamlike..very creative! |
