I am Pathetically addicted to Pathetic by Kalikala Smith At first it was an intrigue, a site that was kinda cool. So I decided, why not sign up? It just might even rule! I wrote a ditty to appease the masses, and low and behold, they must've had glasses. (of something strange, that is...) I was accepted, and as I shouted with glee, I had no idea what was in store for me. The site slowly transformed, my daily habits. Instead of checking email, I checked my poem on rabbits, to see if anyone (please!) had written a comment, or posted a lovely vote beside it. As time went on, I'd log into the site, and instantly my eyes, would drift up to the right. A comment, for me? This couldn't be! Someone actually read, some of my poetry! With a jump and a shout, and a complete freaking, of my roommate out, I clicked to see, what this wonderful comment, could possibly be. Well, it didn't matter what it said, and it still doesn't now. Someone could say, that I smelled like a cow! As long as that number, goes up and not down, I'll never sign off Pathetic, with a frown! 04/12/2004 Author's Note: oh man, too much fun... or something;) Posted on 04/13/2004 Copyright © 2024 Kalikala Smith Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/13/04 at 03:59 AM Full of great energy! Love the enthusiasm! Posted by J. P. Davies on 04/13/04 at 04:00 AM Ahh it's a safe addiction at least though... Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/13/04 at 04:25 AM It is fun reading of your fun Kali......Charlie Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/13/04 at 04:57 PM LOL! Has a kind of "Twas the Night Before Christmas" rhyme and tempo to it. Yeah, not sure what I'd do on my lunch hours without PPS. Thanks for the reminder! :o) Posted by Christel Crews on 04/16/04 at 05:48 AM ah yes, it is addicting :) Posted by John Harder on 04/16/04 at 11:21 AM hahaha. i know exactly what you mean!!! i love comments. oh and you smell like a cow!! Posted by Anne Howe on 04/21/04 at 03:50 AM just to fulfil your ambitions "you smell like a cow" haha such fun reading :) Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)