shell chips crunch beneath my nails then smooth film of membrane slides as I peel hard-boiled eggs
11/07/2003
I like this alot. Good picture painted of evryday life. Almost a still-life painting but in poem form. Very nice. :)
Yes, quite tactile and visual, thanks to your descriptiveness. They're now advertising on a TV infomercial another one of those kitchen gadgets that automatically strips the shell off a hard boil egg.
egg-xactly... this is great!!!
tactile indeed! that was fun, and really recreates the hb egg experience ;)