Lazy Days Of Spring *Acrostic*

by J. P. Davies

Laurels bloom in glades,
As your wind swims softly.
Zephyr's of scented blossoms,
Your own playground is born.

Do you remember
A time when
You felt
So alive?

Or did you

Some days are meant for this
Perennial alacrity of me.
Relaxation is paramount
In the season of birth.
New found life appears,
Giving hope to my soul.


Author's Note: I wrote this for a contest on a different site and thought I'd post it here for fun...

Posted on 04/11/2004
Copyright © 2022 J. P. Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 04/11/04 at 08:51 AM

:D It's so.... pretty. It really reminds me of spring and blossoms on trees. Beautiful.

Posted by Maureen Glaude on 04/11/04 at 12:58 PM

it's so beautiful, with the sense of delicacy of spring.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/11/04 at 04:23 PM

What a great acrostic. just beautiful!

Posted by Ann Krischus on 04/11/04 at 07:01 PM

great piece!

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 04/14/04 at 04:55 AM

god, that's beautiful...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/16/04 at 01:32 AM

Wonderful spirit here JP. Easily and happily slides me back to much younger days...childhood...adolescence. Thanks for that man.

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