| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/09/04 at 01:21 AM ~(8^D)=( He,he,he fun poem Mar....Charlie |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 04/09/04 at 10:15 PM Wonderful little piece..I love the humorous light shed on a dark subject for most of us |
| Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 04/10/04 at 02:13 PM hehe cute. Age catches all of us who don't die young i'm afraid. However, aged faces can tell a thousand tales, and I find a lot of definitions to life reading some of the aged faces I come across. I am sure yours will tell a happy story and show a tender soul. Well written. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/11/04 at 02:35 AM LOL! Very clever ending! Liked the line beginning "let nature...". That nature does! Philosophical salted with humor! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/12/04 at 01:33 AM Both serious and at least good natured if not humorous throughout. An enjoyable read; thanks for sharing it! |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 04/12/04 at 06:20 AM Let my face reflect a dance.....and great last line, too. let's all hope that our sense of humor is the last thing to go, eh? |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 07/03/05 at 03:19 PM It's always a pleasure to stop by and read your delightful verse. This is really special - have you considered submitting it somewhere - I'll bet a magazine for "mature" readers would really appreciate it.... d:-) |
