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It Seems So...
by Kate DemereeIt seems so odd not to have you here
When once I thought to create
A life time of memories at your side
Tonight lying beside the cat
In a bed too large
Memories play inside my head
There are more choices each day
New roads to walk
Vistas that open before my eyes
Yet it seems so odd
Not to have you
Here 04/07/2004 Posted on 04/07/2004
Copyright © 2024 Kate Demeree
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 04/07/04 at 11:52 AM exactly the feeling when that change occurs, the emptiness after huge dreams. Blessings. (PS but I must admit, cats and dogs are great to wake up with) |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 04/07/04 at 12:24 PM A beautiful, heart felt piece of writing Kate - very touching ;) |
| Posted by Michelle Calhoun on 04/07/04 at 07:04 PM A beautiful and obvious heartfelt piece. Adrian works 3rd shift, so I awake each morn in a queensize bed with only my cat. I can relate somewhat. Love and Hugs, Michelle PS I am so glad to see a new piece from you. I have truly missed reading :) |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/08/04 at 11:05 AM how sad and somber toned you paint this and yet I bet that cat, that lays beside you is wondering the same thing, |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/09/04 at 03:39 AM Sad Katie but well written...Charlie |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/11/04 at 02:45 PM The heart longs. The association brings to the fore those moments of life 'alive', 'dead' but beautiful since the associations shall never die, while we keep on walking on these new found paths. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/16/04 at 11:59 AM I had to come back to this poem, Kate,to say, I am truly sorry for your loss of Tigger, your beloved cat and constant companion. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 04/16/04 at 03:52 PM "in a bed too large" says a lot without actually saying it... if that makes any sense, hehe |
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