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In The Blink Of An eye

by Cole Miller

...BLINK...
Lights crashing;
Into sounds.
Chaos fighting;
Against order.
Heart racing;
Beating lungs.
Vision blurs;
Despite eyes.
...BLINK...

02/01/2004

Author's Note: i came across this in a journal. thinking about it...

Posted on 04/05/2004
Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Andrew S Adams on 04/06/04 at 03:27 PM

what an intense slice of a moment. this is generally a lightning bolt all itself; it makes the breath race, it makes the winds of wonder stir up. this is something beatuiful and tense. i love it. peace:a

Posted by Rula Shin on 04/08/04 at 08:47 PM

Yes I agree with Sara...so much experienced and missed all at once...all rolled into one lovely poem that created electrical visions of light and sound in my mind...nice job :-)

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