Topic: Relics Of An Abandoned Mind (Senryus)

by J. P. Davies

dusted cognitive
is floundering in spaces
where thoughts once prevailed

left unattended
fossilized inspirations
are coming to light

and it's useless now
to synapse with each other
when time has numbed both

In our singled mind
relics are abandoned here
lost, collecting dust


Posted on 04/03/2004
Copyright © 2020 J. P. Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/04/04 at 12:42 AM

Refreshingly different...love the poetics. Left me with a strong feeling melloncoly (probably mispelled that), although I think that was your intention.

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