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Dream a little dream
by Ashley BeaudoinTo dream, is in itself a mystery.
The actions that take place can be,
So real, almost to the touch
To remember can be wonderful.
If the dream is amazing
Like a kiss,
That only lasts
Forever,
There
Dreaming
Of love
And of risks
Risks worth taking,
Endless
Dream
Dream alot
And dream often
Not to forget life
And all that can happen
Because a dream is like life
Only you can make it so right
But one mistake can leave you hanging,
Wondering for the rest of eternity what just happened 04/02/2004 Author's Note: My first attempt at a new poetry format, Noncinnet.
Posted on 04/02/2004
Copyright © 2024 Ashley Beaudoin
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quinn Vokes on 04/02/04 at 01:39 PM i like your flow... a lot of though was put into this to make it just so. it's wonderful...~Qu |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/09/04 at 06:06 PM Dream poems are cool, and this one is truly a stand out. Congratulations on becoming The Poet of The Day, Ashley.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 05/09/04 at 07:31 PM wow- this is beautiful... i wonder how i missed it before! congrats on potd! this is an amazing piece! |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 05/09/04 at 07:49 PM This is a form I have not come across before, and would appear to be difficult to write well. You pull it off and it suits your content perfectly |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/16/04 at 05:28 PM wow...makes me want to try one too. Great one Ashley! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/24/14 at 02:25 PM what dreams may come after we've shuffled off this mortal coil must give us pause. truly a wonderful ode you've contemplated and written. |
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