| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/17/04 at 02:31 PM Its fine, I like the haiku and alliteration (im no expert tho) but its a nice crisp image. Birds have a habit of eating only their favorites and discarding the rest. LOL |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 03/17/04 at 02:32 PM 'Rejected seed' sounds like an 'outsider'estranged from the common belief system for not believing in the common belief system. And well, one who isn't common is abnormal. Well, I do identify with this rejected seed. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 03/17/04 at 02:57 PM I like the poem although that green on brown made it difficult to read. I too first thought this poem might be about an ostracized individual...but instead it's about the seeds that are refused by the birds and how nature found a way to put them to use. Very creative indeed and very imaginative - I really like the originality of this piece :-) |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 03/18/04 at 05:42 AM i think this is gorgeous... i see the underdog... winning... attaining that which is rightfully it's own... beautiful, glenn... blessings... |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 03/18/04 at 11:47 PM great imagery |
| Posted by JD Clay on 03/20/04 at 06:08 PM From above or below, this one definitely grows on you, despite the pecking order. Good stuff, Glenn.
Pe4ce... |
