Nothing In Particular (2) by Angela ThomasYou stood in the kitchen,
a crook in your back, waving
a spatula while you spoke
about nothing in particular.
The eggs slid off the pan
into two groups, broken and whole,
you took the bits and pieces,
giving me the rest. You flipped
the bacon onto my plate,
from the front pan, crisp and red,
not a hint of char. The toast popped
up. Two out of three slices
found their way to my plate.
I reached my hand out like I was
ready to receive a baton in a relay,
instead it was breakfast. I sat down
on a creaky chair, my plate on a grotty
table, and had to pause - here was
my plate, everything placed
like a painting someone must
have painted a very long time ago
because they wanted to remember
just what kindness looked like when it
was served to you on a plate.
02/28/2004 Author's Note: revision.
Posted on 02/28/2004 Copyright © 2024 Angela Thomas
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Shannon McEwen on 10/11/11 at 05:38 AM I love this, can see why it's poem of the day - love to me is the images you describe here, not the "fireworks". |
Posted by Mo Couts on 10/11/11 at 03:12 PM Ahhh, I love this. It's so real and honest; very much everything that love should be and is when it's true. Nicely done, and congrats on poem of the day! |
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