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Unwrap
by Quinlan L GibsonLacey pink and made to think Ive just those flannels on again
Valentine Ive got in mind things that will turn your wheels and then
Start at the top, move to the floor, look up at you and beg for more
Lead you through the bedroom door and to the kitchen counter.
Bending over: you say keep the garters on theyre sexy.
Out into the hot tub and you must unwrap me now, find my favorite jet
oh not just yet: let me play first, the thirst has taken me and soon well be in total rapture.
Visual capture, in my mind, time after time is like the start, and now includes the deepest part.
So take me without thinking, keep it primal yet sincere, every now and then just say you love me in my ear,
so I continue to devour with the power that you give me every time.
Be My Valentine?
02/12/2004 Author's Note: ahhhh, sugar is sweet!
Posted on 02/13/2004
Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 02/13/04 at 01:59 AM Quite evocative and enticing with such great rhythm 2... sweet! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/13/04 at 02:41 PM Well timed, worthy continuation of series Quinlan. :o) |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/13/04 at 03:54 PM you're such a hot mama ;) |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 02/13/04 at 08:14 PM Ohh! The hot tub must be boiling over! I love your works, so exciting and lustful. Keep up the good work :-) |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 02/14/04 at 01:11 AM yeah, but in your book sugar is also naughty. Lol. Good stuff Quin. |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 02/14/04 at 04:27 PM Yes, on the kitchen table, behind the couch, out by the mailbox . . . oh wait, you wouldn't do that - or would you? |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 02/15/04 at 04:22 PM Gotta love those favorite jets. Exceptionally sensual read for this valentine's day weekend! |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/15/04 at 05:23 PM Ya, the sugar is sweet, when one is charged with this energy *S*, sugary and sweet. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 02/17/04 at 12:33 AM this flows so beautifully and it's just oooh so good... |
| Posted by Bethany Lee on 02/17/04 at 02:35 AM I agree with daniel on the growling part...nice work...and so suitable for V-Day...bravo! |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/21/08 at 06:47 PM rawr! the 'i love you's in the ear..they really make it. |
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