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Riding on the Shoulders of Gods

by Bruce W Niedt

Piggy-backed with piety, the clouds our fog,

when we reach up to touch the stars,

they are still stars, still out of reach, yet

the moon rolls over us, a ball

tethered to the end of the world.

 

Looking down, we see no giantsÂ’ feet,

but the mold and lichen of civilization,

splotches of city teeming with beings

as big as bacteria from here,

significant to us as a cold.

 

With godsÂ’ impatience, we invent wars

as solution, opposing painful, peaceful

resolution. We watch amused, as little

threads of smoke, oil fires like candle-flames

dot the plains and deserts.

 

We are pleased immensely with ourselves,

until our gargantuan hosts stumble on a rock

or an island, and we tumble too,

through the stratosphere, wondering

what we could have been thinking.

02/07/2004

Posted on 02/08/2004
Copyright © 2024 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/08/04 at 03:06 PM

Great summation of the entire poem in that last stanza Bruce, and good buildup before.

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 09/04/08 at 05:16 PM

'wondering what we could have been thinking.'

this is the way all human error tends to end. great poem, bruce.

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