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"My Favorite Things"

by Angela Thomas

Laying with you was
like falling onto a
warm blanket of sand.
It's not the kind of
sand that pricks you
and hurts, no, it's
powder-white and fine,
conforming and smooth.
All the while, I was
in danger of breathing
too deep, closing my
eyes, and inhaling you.
Still, everytime I
looked up, there you
were.

01/31/2004

Posted on 02/01/2004
Copyright © 2024 Angela Thomas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Emily Tong on 02/11/07 at 02:51 AM

wow this is so intense and really beautifully written. your descriptive voice is incredible! and i love the idea of someone being like fine sand.. great job

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