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Pretty Fowl, Eh?
by Jon-Jacob F DealCanadian geese
Honking, wingéd bowling pins
That shit on your yard 01/30/2004
Author's Note: What are they in South Korea? North Korean geese?
Posted on 01/30/2004
Copyright © 2024 Jon-Jacob F Deal
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 01/30/04 at 08:43 AM LOL! As a canadian I'll admit I was a little miffed at the first read, but in rereading I have come to agree: they do look just like winged bowling pins... |
| Posted by Sam Roberts on 02/08/04 at 12:51 PM Hahaha, oh dear..that's genius.
I'm too scared to be so blunt in my poems, you've done this well..straight to the point. I love haiku's that go against their normal conventions.
well done
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| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 02/18/04 at 02:40 AM Funny and clever, never thought of geese as bowling pins. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 03/17/04 at 02:54 PM Hmmm... another way of seeing the winged migration... may you not be shat upon. |
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