| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by JD Clay on 01/31/04 at 01:48 PM A remarkable exercise in fragility, Sharona. I like the positive stance this piece takes and the metaphoric slap in the face of reality.
Pe4ce... |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 02/02/04 at 03:38 AM You started so assertively-'I am a stone.....solid'
and ended up a bit not so sure-'I wish I were a stone'. Well, this states the state of your world, within as well as without. I wish I were a stone has another dimension, too. You sound so fed up with this so called animate world. Well, this piece conveys the intended meaning. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 02/02/04 at 10:52 PM lovely analogy...simple and wonderfully written... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/08/04 at 11:18 PM Excellent use of metaphor and analogy. I'm sure we all at times have wished for the same. Wish I had written this...glad you did. |
| Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 04/06/05 at 02:32 AM Walls of brick can take you there. This one touched me deeply the sting of pain because of humaness is so obvious throughout. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 07/25/06 at 11:39 AM I love this. I can relate to it so well. Great write! Congrats on POOTD- much deserved! |
