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Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/25/04 at 09:25 PM Fun haiku Glen; You shouldn't smack your lips
when you eat. ~(8^D)=(....Charlie |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/25/04 at 10:26 PM funny how that works...I think stomach aches actually improve hearing |
Posted by David R Spellman on 01/26/04 at 11:51 PM Though I know it can be serious and disturbing, I still got a laugh at the image of this and all it implies. Good one Glenn! |
Posted by Mara Meade on 01/29/04 at 04:15 PM thought-provoking, as usual. |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/30/04 at 01:00 AM you nailed it in the gut... well form, good man :) |
Posted by JD Clay on 02/01/04 at 07:24 PM Audiological poetry, Glenn. Your precise presentation reads like an aphorism born of temptation. I too fall prey to this burly beast from time to time, especially during holidays. There's something about good home cooking that just seems to tune me out.
Pe4ce... |