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Who Was Mona Lisa?

by Bruce W Niedt

What is it about this DiVinci portrait

of a young Florentine woman

in dark muted tones,

seated before an idealized landscape

that provokes such adulation?

 

Here in the Louvre

lines form through the great hall

past huge canvasses of Biblical scenes

and mythological conflict, raiment billowing,

colors driving the drama,

 

past all the bombast of the Italian Renaissance

to see the quiet woman, behind protective glass,

in the corner.

It must be the smile.

It must be those barely-turned corners of the mouth

 

that knowing, reserved expression

that makes people from all over the world

wait patiently along the cordons

for a brief glimpse of this enigma.

Who was she? A noted merchant’s wife?

 

Nowhere in his notes does Leonardo mention her.

One theorist even suggests that it’s a self-portrait –

a rendition of himself as a younger woman.

That would explain the smile – a smirk, perhaps,

as if the joke was on us.

01/18/2004

Author's Note: [Written before reading The DaVinci Code by Dan Brown.]

Posted on 01/18/2004
Copyright © 2026 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by JD Clay on 01/19/04 at 04:26 AM

Enigmatic poetry, Bruce. Not only is your poem an articulate account of your journey, but you have posed a puzzling quandry for the reader along the way. Bien ecrit, mon ami. Pe4ce...

Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/20/04 at 08:05 PM

It does make one wonder!

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/14/04 at 10:24 PM

This was written as if you were standing right there...so you brought us to the hall, where I imagine the slanting light and the sights all about..and then your query that you end with a touch of humor...loved it! Like going on a great field trip!

Posted by Shannon McEwen on 09/24/09 at 05:05 AM

again, I love the random poetry function, I would have missed this and the last line is killer for me, made me wonder and smile at the same time

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