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by Ken Harnisch

 

I brought the buggy to a stop

So my thirsty horse could drink his fill

And when he’d had enough, he neighed

But I just sat there, cold and still

 

Something in the wintry field

Had caught my eye, a broken bird

Or perhaps a cat, who didn’t stir

I sat, but nothing more was heard

 

I thought about alighting then

To see if I could lend a hand

And then remembered all the times

I’d walked this lonely, lonely land

 

When no wing or hoof or friendly claw

Had come to fix the shattered me

No human voice cried from this road

No one stepped close to even see

 

And though I know how it always goes

How two wrongs never make a right

Now I was a shattered whole

It seemed somehow to be alright 

 

That I could watch a creature stir

And flap a wing or paw in pain

Then stare as if I hadn’t seen

And click the reins, to move again  

 

01/16/2004

Author's Note: It being coooooold!!! in the Northeast, I decided a little "Frostian" look at things would not matter

Posted on 01/16/2004
Copyright © 2024 Ken Harnisch

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/16/04 at 04:47 PM

he he. So we found you in a horse-drawn buggy afterall! Seriously, this is haunting and thought-provoking. Stark and real, full of poignance and self-reflection reminding me of Ethan Frome somehow, and that story. Wonderful.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/18/04 at 05:06 AM

"And miles to go before I sleep." Yes I definitely feel the Frostian atmosphere, both here in the poem and in the real world here in Ottawa. I'm sure Frost would be flattered by this future echoe Ken.

Posted by Kate Demeree on 01/21/04 at 05:58 AM

And I would read and wonder.. at the man who penned the poem.. if he was a bit nostalgic, or had travled far from home. How I read and re-read this one, it's stark images linger in my mind. Very vivid piece....

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