Miku Poems by Maureen Glaudeicicles/pending/plunks
bare patch/roof snow/melts off
Paper Whites/damp earth/umbrellas
clay pots/rain on roof/mud room
interlaced fingers/feelings/between
shamrock etched/on singer's/cheek
assault activates/stomachs lurch/destruction
candle vigils/full moon/not child's play
cancer centre/day unit/intravenus
reclining chairs/nurses' fingers/arms picked
folded note/secretly passed/love confession 03/24/2003 Author's Note: Written in March 03 on various themes, many Spring,(including some specific themes that year) these are my first attempt at Miku. As taught to me, they always have the / in between and are one-line each.
Posted on 01/15/2004 Copyright © 2024 Maureen Glaude
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Posted by Agnes Eva on 01/15/04 at 07:52 PM these are intriguing snippets. love the "clay pots/rain on roof/mud room" very much and "icicles/pending/plunks" and "folded note/secretly passed/love confession" also familiar and cheery :) |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/16/04 at 05:55 PM Fascinating read and style I'd never heard of. Some lines seem related to others, others not...on purpose? |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/16/04 at 11:58 PM After a second reading this nicely reads as an unpretentious "found poem." Love the closing line...sweet reminder of past innocense...loves. :o) |
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