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Miku Poems

by Maureen Glaude

icicles/pending/plunks

bare patch/roof snow/melts off

Paper Whites/damp earth/umbrellas

clay pots/rain on roof/mud room

interlaced fingers/feelings/between

shamrock etched/on singer's/cheek

assault activates/stomachs lurch/destruction

candle vigils/full moon/not child's play

cancer centre/day unit/intravenus

reclining chairs/nurses' fingers/arms picked

folded note/secretly passed/love confession

03/24/2003

Author's Note: Written in March 03 on various themes, many Spring,(including some specific themes that year) these are my first attempt at Miku. As taught to me, they always have the / in between and are one-line each.

Posted on 01/15/2004
Copyright © 2021 Maureen Glaude

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Agnes Eva on 01/15/04 at 07:52 PM

these are intriguing snippets. love the "clay pots/rain on roof/mud room" very much and "icicles/pending/plunks" and "folded note/secretly passed/love confession" also familiar and cheery :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/16/04 at 05:55 PM

Fascinating read and style I'd never heard of. Some lines seem related to others, others not...on purpose?

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/16/04 at 11:58 PM

After a second reading this nicely reads as an unpretentious "found poem." Love the closing line...sweet reminder of past innocense...loves. :o)

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