| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/14/04 at 02:07 PM Quite mysterious and a bit haunting. Deep in its simplicity, evocative in its images. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 01/14/04 at 03:10 PM this is one i need to sit on (but not for too long... i don't want to be a black brick)... contemplative and very well written piece... blessings... |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/15/04 at 02:48 PM To add the black tunnel to the list of what women are capable of...yikes again. Your work never ceases to amaze me by forcing me to look at things differently. I think I'll start a notebook, "The wide world of women, according to Max". What do you think? |
| Posted by Jolie Jordan on 01/16/04 at 02:05 AM See, this just proves the theory, that girls are eeevviil. I like this one though;) |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/16/04 at 06:19 PM Oh my word... Max... this is awesome. There's a song by Jimmy Webb, sung by Art Garfunkle, called "All My Love's Laughter" - it is so much like this... what a warning... what a warning. |
| Posted by Bethany Lee on 01/17/04 at 04:24 PM "lengthening the tunnel to God" there's a lot of depth and darkness to this piece...as of late, a seemingly evil woman has been your catalyst... |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/23/04 at 12:36 AM Can a poem be vivid and dark at the same time? If it is a Bouillet it can. Your work always transports me to another level... Brilliant, Max. Thanks. |
