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Just Life
by Kate Demeree
Is it a just life
Or just life
This change
The dull gray sky
Once vibrant blue
Scrolling cloudless
In solitary view 01/07/2004 Posted on 01/07/2004
Copyright © 2024 Kate Demeree
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/07/04 at 11:17 PM I remember that feeling. You think, is it the same world out there, after losses? poignant,reflective of that empty feeling, sad, but so beautifully written. Yes, fine play on just life or life just???you're brilliant. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 01/08/04 at 09:43 AM looking at the grey skies outside the windowm I definitely can relate to this one Kate. Very much a winter poem, me thinks...here's to spring huh? thanks for sharing ;) |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 01/09/04 at 07:17 PM wanting for something, anything new, here's hoping that someday, the best will come to you!... [;0)~ |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 01/12/04 at 12:35 AM ooh! kate i love the flow of this poem, it is just perfect! great job *hugs* |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/15/04 at 01:09 PM the sky should be thankful for your looking up. and we who have had our share of looking up, should be thankful that you paint it for the life that it truly is and not backdrop. |
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