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Greedy Girl
by Heide McAlister-BatesA single droplet of
sweet
warm
musk
clings to the tip of
my tongue
as I retreat
from my
feast.
You -
panting
wide-eyed
clinging to the linens
like a lifeline.
Me?
Going back for my just desserts.
01/06/2004 Author's Note: Might as well start off with a bang...
Posted on 01/06/2004
Copyright © 2024 Heide McAlister-Bates
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 01/06/04 at 09:48 PM i like this one. good punch at the end;) |
| Posted by Richard Trotter on 01/07/04 at 03:22 PM a really vivid and enjoyable read. |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 01/09/04 at 02:59 AM wonderful... |
| Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 01/09/04 at 11:12 PM Nice :) |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 01/11/04 at 07:04 PM mmm sexy and clever, you capture the intensity & feeling of that scene directly |
| Posted by Allan Haslinds on 05/27/04 at 09:28 PM Very nicely done. The non-traditional spelling in the last line creates a terrific double meaning. |
| Posted by Melanie A Bennett on 06/27/04 at 02:01 PM Wow... is is hot in here? :) I like this! :) |
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