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Edgar Pompfrey Odis Crustice

by Michael Hamlin

Edgar Pompfrey Odis Crustice
Had a dirty, ratted mustache
Fleas and ticks, and a manta ray
In his mustache, they all did stay

As he became frantic and worried
From his mustache, the creatures scurried
Now neat and trim, as a shining sea
Edgar's mustache is critter free

01/03/2004

Posted on 01/04/2004
Copyright © 2024 Michael Hamlin

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/05/18 at 08:04 PM

Congrats on POTD Michael. Cleverly crafted and expressed from start to finish. Big smile while reading it.

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