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Sugar Coated (for her pleasure)

by Quinlan L Gibson

Pucker up, butter cup
the creamy center is the treasure
of the sweetooth lover extraordinare.
Almost there, just go easy
for she’s heaven to eat, slow like honey
and it clings to your lips thick like chocolate
warm and rich, take that first lick and savor the flavor
as it melts in your mouth, warm down south so move quickly
or the good stuff is gone, fine as wine aged at precise time
sip of lust, it has ripple effects when just right
see the light filling inside, claim your prize; you’re there.

01/03/2004

Author's Note: oh yes, the first dirtygurl of 2004.

Posted on 01/04/2004
Copyright © 2024 Quinlan L Gibson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/05/04 at 11:08 PM

Happy New Year.... it will be if I keep reading this! Excuse me, I have to take off my tie and lay down for awhile!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/06/04 at 05:37 PM

*blushing* as long as it's clean dirty gurl! :o)

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 01/07/04 at 12:45 AM

intense, jolting, sensual...i love it...

Posted by Traci Mabats on 01/07/04 at 01:12 AM

Lol, you know I bet you could write the most interesting reviews for sensual-related products. This was fantabulous.

Posted by J. P. Davies on 02/18/04 at 08:12 AM

Yummy, The tastes are evoked by your words...a sensory poem full of evocative flavours.

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