At A Loss For Tenses by Anita MacLooking at you is like Nostalgia
full-blown and in my face
only it isn't
what was
what could've been
what should've been,
but what is... and isn't.
Like I miss the you I never knew,
but always Knew
was there
would be there
is there now.
And I rack my brain,
is it too late?
And I don't know why I couldn't hold on through it all
I couldn't watch you trying to find yourself
knowing you eventually would
because you kept tapping this bruise blindly
and what does one say to that?
And besides, we all know
I'm bad at keeping in touch
you're bad at keeping in touch...
we were all bad at the job...
So we'd drift together and apart like a loosely tied raft.
But you were
too far from me
too close to me
for me to even Think about trying to deal with
myself
concerning you.
But I swear,
not a day went by that I forgot.
Because life is still life without you
but not quite so fun(ny).
12/30/2003 Author's Note: What does one say to that?
Posted on 12/30/2003 Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/30/03 at 11:12 PM great form... i love this style... was does one say?... read me again... excellent poem... blessings... |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/30/03 at 11:48 PM amazing how this speaks to me. Especially the ending. We may not miss the pain of the near-miss, but the humorous moments, they really get you! wonderful, I'm printing it up. I also loved the use of colour, and the too close to parts |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/30/03 at 11:49 PM p.s. great title and first line too |
Posted by J. P. Davies on 12/31/03 at 07:40 AM Love this...I can definitely relate. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/02/04 at 05:27 PM Excellent title; poem aptly reflects it. |
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