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by Andrew S Adams

i picked out a star for the moment. i named it after you-
it started with a goodnight kiss and ended with a hello
love+hate≠mutuallyexclusive
the morning after was a hell from which i couldn't escape
the star shot away and left me with you in this cold, akward evening

all in one breath.

12/28/2003

Author's Note: it's a concept at this point. but you get the gist, right?

Posted on 12/29/2003
Copyright © 2025 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cymbre Dolphay on 12/29/03 at 08:46 PM

*raises an eyebrow and grins* I always loved that, getting the gist of something.

Posted by Anita Mac on 12/31/03 at 06:59 AM

Wow. This is really good, sad, but good. You use the crossout to great affect.

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