| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Richard Trotter on 12/28/03 at 10:52 PM the form is vivid and creates a great atmosphere. I liked the image of the mounted warrior, and the beat of the horses' hooves. |
| Posted by Jane E Pearce on 12/29/03 at 03:42 PM Leslie-I am really impressed with the imagery and beat. The reader is there with that "thum thum." Very good work. |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 12/29/03 at 05:45 PM Leslie, as usual, you have created another incredible poem. The beat and the imagery are mental calisthentics for me. |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 12/30/03 at 02:00 AM Ditto on the Wolfgang comment, this is a great vibe! |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 12/30/03 at 03:22 PM best one i've read from you. by far. |
| Posted by Lindsay Sanders on 12/30/03 at 11:16 PM i enjoyed this very much. |
| Posted by Jolie Jordan on 01/01/04 at 01:46 PM I'm promising myself right now that I'll use the word "palpate" soon, since I just love it so much now, lol. you always have the perfect words for the perfect situtations Leslie. does Aiko know about this piece yet? if not.. send her a message. I'm sure she'd love to read it. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/25/04 at 09:03 PM Love the form and choice of words in this Leslie. An envigorating read to be sure. The word fermata is a new one for me. |
| Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 03/28/06 at 07:13 AM Thum thum thum...the rhythm is addictive... new favorite for me... |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/14/06 at 11:26 PM Leslie, this is incredible. It holds a bittersweet-sadness-joy memory that can't be stopped. It is vivid and rocks to its own beat.
~Chelle~ |
