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A Personal Universe

by Karl Waldbauer

Past the blazing star trails,
beyond the comet dust
I searched.
Through Saturn’s regal rings,
crossing Pluto’s icy path
I searched.

On my blue home planet
among the soaring pines
I searched for you.
Across the raging seas,
in lush fertile valleys
I searched for you.

I saw galaxies, so many moons,
felt radiation, then killing cold
when I reached for you
across my personal
universe.

12/20/2003

Author's Note: Sometimes the greatest distance we travel is when we reach out to those closest to us.

Posted on 12/20/2003
Copyright © 2022 Karl Waldbauer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/22/03 at 07:15 PM

Beautiful words and images that embellish a wisdom that satiates the senses and the mind. Great writing.

Posted by Aaron Blair on 12/23/03 at 05:59 PM

Really pretty, and rather true.

Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 12/26/03 at 06:13 AM

you have given me chills on this one star, brilliant sliver of moon night.

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 12/30/03 at 03:47 AM

mine is right there in my bed,yet i still search. this is beautiful.

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/30/03 at 03:51 AM

this is purely beautiful... what a precious universe this is... blessings...

Posted by Anne Engelen on 06/09/05 at 02:15 PM

congratulation Karl with your POTD.

Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 06/09/05 at 03:18 PM

congratulations, karl. this is a powerful piece. very deserving of the front page! pk

Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 06/10/05 at 01:34 AM

i'm so glad you received POTD for this piece... blessings...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/10/05 at 03:40 AM

Excellent romantic poem, fresh and unique, not easily done these days. Superb choice for POTD. Congrats!

Posted by Ann Krischus on 10/05/06 at 01:52 PM

i have just discovered your poetry and i will probably spend the rest of the day reading your library. i am so pleased that i came across these poems of yours.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/02/09 at 02:22 PM

i don't kno how I missed this gem . Very romantic and quite deserving of POTD!

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