wrapped in your corpse by Rachelle Howemy tomb
was in the form of a bathroom,
in boston, where i stood, naked,
wrapped in a towel and
dripping with wet.
i had showered, and
washed you off,
scrubbed your memories
like a bandit.
i had soiled myself
in all the lies that
you sold to me, for two bits each,
every one wrapped in
golden paper
with an "i love you" note
attached.
i had begged god
for forgiveness for
opening my thighs and
taking you in,
for letting you attach
yourself to my womb.
i still was sleeping
with you at the time.
but you were miles away,
at home, wrapped in your bed,
wrapped in someone else, and
i had been weeping that night.
but i scratched your name
across the mirror with my crying finger,
in the steam.
i had drawn raindrops and
other things,
over my cheek,
scrawled expletives and
places on the windowpane.
(and you
you were dead to me.) 12/19/2003 Author's Note: i repeated myself deliberately. so there. and! daniel rollings, my god, way to inspire, my dear.
Posted on 12/19/2003 Copyright © 2024 Rachelle Howe
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/19/03 at 08:21 PM I used to love Boston. Now I will think of it as a freshly showered corpse. Great verse. |
Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/19/03 at 08:51 PM Your poems always leave me speechless. |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/20/03 at 01:58 AM Wow, was this the answer to some challenge? Where can I find them? :-)
Amazing, and I enjoyed every word!!! |
Posted by Jolie Jordan on 12/22/03 at 11:17 PM I never know what to say when I comment on something that I really really like.. but I just like the writer to know that I was here, and that I felt it. |
Posted by Lindsay Sanders on 12/24/03 at 10:26 PM ::shivers::
uh... wow. |
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/13/06 at 07:15 AM Only love can make us hate ourselves so well...this is a grab you by the core and squeeze work of words....I loved it. |
Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 07/11/07 at 03:56 AM I'm frisking myself down right now to see if you were somewhere in my past, when this was going on with me. Extremely well done, my dear. |
Posted by Meghan Helmich on 09/29/08 at 08:43 PM this one says it all. |
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