Posted by Jolie Jordan on 12/30/03 at 04:35 AM I can't tell you how well I can relate to this poem, especially the first four lines. it's funny how sometimes the things that hurt us the most are the things that we seemingly need. this is a love poem, a poem of longing, and a poem of bittersweet happiness. you have alot of really emotion-packed lines in here J.P., and they all work really well with eachother. I know it sounds weird, but I've read this back to myself again three times, it almost sounds like you're looking into a mirror while writing this. a reflection, perhaps, of missing something, especially found in the last stanza. I don't know, I told you it sounded rather weird:) anyway, overall, wonderful poem, great pick for POTD. Congratulations. |