Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/15/03 at 01:13 PM this is amazing. Great haiku fodder and the result very fine. |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/15/03 at 05:36 PM 'Karma of grain' nice coinage and so meaningful reflecting the meaninglessness of the envy, philosophically. |
Posted by Mara Meade on 12/15/03 at 09:52 PM Funny how the dove, peaceful, can find sustenance in something intangible, but the jay, noisy, only envies. Great one, Glenn. |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/18/03 at 05:57 AM brilliant... geez, all of you haiku writers are really changing my mind about this form... :)... blessings... |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/19/03 at 11:32 PM The Karma is always greener... the images flutters in front of my face on this one. The Doves get all the breaks. ;) |
Posted by Indigo Tempesta on 12/21/03 at 04:11 AM quite nice. i like its directness. |
Posted by Indigo Tempesta on 12/21/03 at 04:11 AM quite nice. i like its directness. |