Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Jolie Jordan on 12/14/03 at 03:35 PM You were a member a while back, I think? I read this in the member applications and I was blown away. this is so awesome. Welcome to Pathetic.. or I should say, welcome back to Pathetic;) |
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/14/03 at 11:58 PM Well, I don't have a "before" with pathetic, so all your work will be a first for me. I love this! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/16/03 at 03:34 AM Highly innovative and tangy word combos make for an exciting construction and read here Richard. |
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 12/16/03 at 10:08 PM so happy you have returned...love this imagery in this poem...it's beautiful... |
Posted by Stephanie Kent on 12/17/03 at 06:02 AM Your imagery in this is captivating...:) |
Posted by Wendy Geal on 03/05/04 at 05:05 AM i LOVE this. amazing job! xxo |
Posted by Anne Howe on 04/20/04 at 09:03 AM emotions are as warm as the snow is cold .... a lovely read |
Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 02/02/07 at 10:15 PM such a sumptuous piece, nice work! |
Posted by Jared Fladeland on 08/21/09 at 04:42 PM That last stanza really hits me. Congrats |