|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Jolie Jordan on 12/14/03 at 03:35 PM|
You were a member a while back, I think? I read this in the member applications and I was blown away. this is so awesome. Welcome to Pathetic.. or I should say, welcome back to Pathetic;)
|Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/14/03 at 11:58 PM|
Well, I don't have a "before" with pathetic, so all your work will be a first for me. I love this!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/16/03 at 03:34 AM|
Highly innovative and tangy word combos make for an exciting construction and read here Richard.
|Posted by Ginette T Belle on 12/16/03 at 10:08 PM|
so happy you have returned...love this imagery in this poem...it's beautiful...
|Posted by Stephanie Kent on 12/17/03 at 06:02 AM|
Your imagery in this is captivating...:)
|Posted by Wendy Geal on 03/05/04 at 05:05 AM|
i LOVE this. amazing job! xxo
|Posted by Anne Howe on 04/20/04 at 09:03 AM|
emotions are as warm as the snow is cold .... a lovely read
|Posted by Trisha De Gracia on 02/02/07 at 10:15 PM|
such a sumptuous piece, nice work!
|Posted by Jared Fladeland on 08/21/09 at 04:42 PM|
That last stanza really hits me. Congrats