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Sorrow's Plight

by Brian Francis

I know how pain can sear and stretch

I watch it deep in your eyes

But sometimes love demands of us

A sacrifice of greater magnitude

A willingness to do what is right

Even if it means the loss of love

Even if it means the endless night

 

I have watched your suffering

endured your painful tortured eyes

long has love thus held my heart

and bound me to our fate

compassion’s tears have torn my soul

worn great ruts through my being

yet has strangely made me whole

 

canyons of empathy glorious vistas abound

Where in picturesque grandeur

The horizon of my soul reveals its truth

a barren waste of empty mourning

Screams of needful lonely moments

wailing; echo through the chasms

seeking healing and atonements

12/11/2003

Posted on 12/11/2003
Copyright © 2024 Brian Francis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/13/03 at 03:53 PM

i love how your words can touch me deeply...you make it look simple to talk about that deep of emotions

Posted by Sam Roberts on 12/14/03 at 09:32 PM

that last stanza is brilliant, I've felt this. Thank you x

Posted by JD Clay on 12/21/03 at 06:01 PM

This is a very powerful plea, Brian. Well stated and brimming with compassion. Good stuff! Pe4ce...

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/09/08 at 01:08 AM

A great build to a brilliant last stanza.

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