by Anne Engelen

My heartÂ’s winter scene

Totally wrapped in frozen

Iceflowers with thorns


Posted on 12/11/2003
Copyright © 2021 Anne Engelen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 12/11/03 at 06:52 PM

i feel "icy" too

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/11/03 at 08:00 PM

I see icy?....Charlie

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/11/03 at 08:02 PM

But spring is just around the corner....Charlie

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/12/03 at 04:00 PM

The mood is the cause of this scene. The moods are always the cause of identifications. The impressions are the cause of moods and the associations are the cause of impressions. Nicely produced minimal.

Posted by Jack Lanier on 12/12/03 at 09:03 PM

Great verse, Anne. Often thorns can be a good thing....:) Jack

Posted by Brian Francis on 12/13/03 at 03:43 PM

Hmmm a tad dark but wonderful none-the-less. --bf

Posted by David R Spellman on 12/14/03 at 05:32 AM

Whoa! Talk about frigid!! SO much said with this one Anne. I shudder at the implications... [;0)~

Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/15/03 at 07:32 PM

"Iceflowers with thorns" What a tremendous visual! Great verse with splendid word choice! :)

Posted by Mara Meade on 12/15/03 at 10:40 PM

Akh... just the visual of ice stings my hands, let alone an ice-flower with thorns. Very descriptive....

Posted by Glenn Currier on 01/06/04 at 08:58 PM

A perfect mixture of nature-al and human images. Evocative and captivating haiku, Anne. One of the best ones I've ever read.

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