| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 12/11/03 at 03:17 PM ere that we could to youthful springs return our aged flow and torch the forest with our lights well spent and passion. you have done both here and admirably so, Kate. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 12/11/03 at 07:04 PM this is really amazing...fantastic flow...this goes on my favs list!! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/11/03 at 09:32 PM Another good one from the mind of Kate.....Charlie |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/12/03 at 02:00 AM it carried me every step of the way. Slowly passed the winter...repeated, so effectively and profoundly. a very beautifully written heartfelt piece that makes us ache. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 12/12/03 at 04:03 AM beautifully sad... |
| Posted by Michelle Calhoun on 12/13/03 at 04:59 AM As always you have painted a beautiful picture for us with a brilliant walk down memory lane. You made me feel as if I were there with you. Your words took my breath away and brought a tear to my eye. *smiles* |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 12/15/03 at 01:24 AM A beautiful expression of saddness and yearning of someone lost..outstanding imagery...and the use of reminders (ie)scent and the picture is memorable |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 12/15/03 at 02:36 AM Associations rooted deep of emotional nature are bound to bring back the moments lived and relived time and again.This living and reliving helps release of the repressed desires, unfulfilled wishes and longings. This flowing piece depicts those moments beautifully. For you this was living again. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 06/21/07 at 04:00 AM I had forgotten how stunning your poetry could be...and now I know why I won't forget agan. Wow. |
| Posted by Maude Curtis on 07/05/09 at 05:49 PM Absolutely beautiful and achingly sad. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/30/10 at 12:57 PM congratulations Kate on POTD. this is certainly one of your finest of the fine you have stocked for us fortunate ones in your fine ode cellar. |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 01/30/10 at 05:04 PM very beautiful, congrats! |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 01/31/10 at 01:59 AM The picture you paint with your words leaves my heart skipping beats. Congratulations, Kate! It is a gift to find you POTD...lovelight*hugs |
