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Crash your wooden plankings against me

by Gabrielle L Gervais

Like a tapering lighthouse- I rest lying awake, waiting for you to come.
An overtaken hill, biding it’s time on lookout for the lost ones to
crash their wooden plankings against the stones at my feet. Where
their tattered postings and beached skin
Scold me for my idleness.

Like a porch light harvesting moths,
I flicker. Augmenting the shadows
of lonely suburban sidewalks.

With my knees reclining to my chest and my opposing fingers grasping
each other, like my grandmother’s once did in prayer, I wait.

Like an expectant holiday child I rush to you and find sight and sound
lying awake, waiting for me to come to them.

12/10/2003

Posted on 12/10/2003
Copyright © 2024 Gabrielle L Gervais

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by David R Spellman on 12/11/03 at 11:30 PM

Some really great similes here that I really like. And the line "Augmenting the shadows of lonely suburban sidewalks" blows me away!

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 02/19/04 at 12:38 AM

love the first stanza...jam packed with very effective imagery...

Posted by Melissa Arel on 09/04/07 at 01:41 PM

you definitely have penned some amazing turns of phrase here; loved this!

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