Breathing in death Every hour on the hour And points from in between Deadening the buds of flavor With pepper hot smoke That browns the pink And changes Bright white pearls to yellow Grabbing and tugging at the pace Shortening the wind within Digits stained with poisoned resin Hold to satisfy an uneasy urge Only to snuff out the last burning ember And wait until the next torch is passed Gaze into the box to calculate When your next stop will have to be Thoughts of passing by flicker then fade As the addiction controls the road Weak against the force That has strengthened with the years You still tell yourself I have to quit
12/10/2003
COUGH GAG COUGH Sure can relate to this one. Very uniquely put!
How well put and so well written. It sure brought some awful memories to the surface: a powerful piece you wrote, Tom. Frozen grapes? Wow! Zyban worked for me.
familiar with this subject ... i simply love the language of the piece