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Trying To Quit

by Thomas K. Hunt


Breathing in death
Every hour on the hour
And points from in between

Deadening the buds of flavor
With pepper hot smoke
That browns the pink
And changes
Bright white pearls to yellow

Grabbing and tugging at the pace
Shortening the wind within

Digits stained with poisoned resin
Hold to satisfy an uneasy urge
Only to snuff out the last burning ember
And wait until the next torch is passed

Gaze into the box to calculate
When your next stop will have to be
Thoughts of passing by flicker then fade
As the addiction controls the road

Weak against the force
That has strengthened with the years
You still tell yourself
I have to quit







12/10/2003

Posted on 12/10/2003
Copyright © 2024 Thomas K. Hunt

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/10/03 at 05:07 PM

COUGH GAG COUGH Sure can relate to this one. Very uniquely put!

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 12/11/03 at 09:00 AM

How well put and so well written. It sure brought some awful memories to the surface: a powerful piece you wrote, Tom. Frozen grapes? Wow! Zyban worked for me.

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 12/15/03 at 06:40 AM

familiar with this subject ... i simply love the language of the piece

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